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Diamonds Deep In the Dust

They are EVERYWHERE, if we would only look, and bend and scratch through the thick dust of the weary mundane, a world too often heavy with boredom, pettiness, even thoughtless cruelty. But the jewels are there! Kick bravely into life's dirt, you'll see them sparkling like secret stars in some dark, cold, lonely universe: red rubies of love, the deep, deep blue sapphires of hope and most precious of all-- myriad perfect diamonds, each one an endless soul, God's eternal treasure....

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Date: 2/17/2020 8:55:00 AM
“perfect diamonds, each one an endless soul” ~ I love it!
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Date: 12/12/2018 3:27:00 PM
a gem of a poem LJ, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/13/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Jan, and joyous holidays!
Date: 12/12/2018 5:26:00 AM
L.J., I admire the way you use gemstones to represent love, hope and other treasures of life. Congratulations on your win! There were many terrific entries, including yours. Thank you for participating in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/12/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, I am truly honored! And have a joyous Christmas!
Date: 4/28/2018 9:17:00 AM
Your selection and arrangement of words and images give pleasure as from a lovely tune. The word: ‘Diamonds’ caught my eye, partly because I have also submitted a poem with ‘Diamonds’ in the title.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/29/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Geoffrey--I checked out your poem and was impressed as well by your take on those little stones that so many crave. And I was also impressed on how you could see it as a song, which now too I can see as well. (Alas, I am tone deaf when it comes to music, which I love like life itself.)
Date: 1/25/2018 1:32:00 PM
Wonderful poem. Love the imagery. Superbly done. Congrats on your win, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/25/2018 9:05:00 PM
Thank you,L.G., much appreciated!
Date: 1/22/2018 6:50:00 PM
this is a wonderful poem. The message is superb and the writing is simple yet elegant, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/23/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea-- that means a lot coming from a poet of your caliber and range!

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