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Diamonds Are a Girl's Best Friend

Dainty dolls with flowered walls Setting sail for her promised land.. Pink ballerinas, sequined of light Breathless stages a mirror she finds ? Where beauty paints her eyes anew Caravan colours, their world in blue Skies which sparkle these champagne scenes... Ghost whom whisper, Electra dreams ? Knocking Upon her door for an interview; She, my love so true.

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Date: 8/20/2013 4:03:00 AM
I imagine for your descriptions the shards of light the dance excitedly flashing around the room - a rainbow of colours - glitzing in he light - now you see them now you do''t... Forever a different illusion. Thanks for your most welcome thoughts left on my own writes, your support most welcomed!
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Date: 8/19/2013 8:38:00 PM
An impressive write with beautiful imagery and elegant flow. Your subject is portrayed perfectly. Very nice :)
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