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Diamond Trail

Chariot trail of diamonds discerned through a Jewelers' eyeglass. A. Green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2010 11:38:00 PM
Superior grammatical flow and imagery... I am a HUGE fan already!!! Blessings, Keith
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Date: 4/29/2010 5:24:00 PM
When reading this, I thought of two things. That the jeweler is busy picking up the diamonds and examining them and leaving a trail behind, or when he looks into his glass he sees the many brilliant reflections of light in the diamond. I miss the meaning sometimes because I get my own from it, but this was beautiful!
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:06:00 PM
Hey Amy, Thnx for reading and posting your kind comments on my writes...means a lot to me...Jimmy
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:08:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Amy. I have had some wonderful entries so far. Inc yours
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