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Today is my parents 60th Anniversary! I wrote a different poem just for them but to celebrate on Soup...this one.

Do you feel the air today? Your breath as diamonds fill the space. The jewels cascading, twirling, romancing. Did you notice your feet no longer touch the floor? Floating, in disbelief; gratitude at the forever after spice of life. Your wrists ribbon’d together — It’s been a pleasure. Time moves so fast but it’s so full. Paradise could be so sweet underneath the moon and stars. Thursday of your dreams. Diamond Jubilation — Fills the trenches of your cheeks Young at heart and awfully sweet. 1/9/2020

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Date: 1/11/2020 2:28:00 AM
Ah, so beautiful and in honor of your parents. What a gift! What a marvelous marvelous gift! Well done! I hope in thirteen years when I get there one of my children thinks about doing something this wonderful for my diamond jubilation!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2020 5:04:00 AM
You have me smiling this morning! Be blessed, dear friend!
Date: 1/10/2020 9:03:00 AM
How beautiful. Congrats to your parents. A Significant accomplishment.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2020 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Richard!
Date: 1/10/2020 4:59:00 AM
What a beautiful dedication poem in honor of their 60th anniversary... happy anniversary to them :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 1/9/2020 6:19:00 PM
Wonderful news about your parents and a wonderful poem to bless them, Kim. May you all celebrate in the full joy of the day, till the moon shines upon you tonight Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2020 6:27:00 PM
A weekend affair :)
Date: 1/9/2020 1:02:00 PM
So touching and fitting a tribute. Here's to many, many more! Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 1/9/2020 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations to them both Kim, hope they have a beautiful day. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2020 12:26:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/9/2020 10:11:00 AM
wow what an outstanding achievement 60 years together, many congrats to them I hope they have a super day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! Cheers...Kim
Date: 1/9/2020 8:54:00 AM
This is so cheerful Kim--enjoyed every word from start to finish. Congrats to your parents--indeed a day of jubilation!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! Cheers...Kim
Date: 1/9/2020 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful Kim and congratulations to your parents. 60 years is remarkable.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2020 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! Cheers...Kim

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