Diamond Scuffle

They found you in the dust behind the barns
A skittish spark with lightning in your legs
A diamond in the rough with uncut charm

All promise
All heartbeat
All raw edges

You burst onto the track like dawn breaking
Crowds rising as your hooves carved out a future
Every stride a prophecy every win a rumor
That greatness had been hiding in plain sight

Seasons wear on even the brightest stones
Your shine dulled not from lack but from living
From so many winning miles run hard 
Expectations stacked like saddles on your back

Some whispered you’d lost your glimmer
That the sparkle they once saw slipped away

But diamonds don’t vanish they change
They carry their history in every facet
Every scuff a story every flaw a truth

And you Diamond Scuffle…

Still catch the light in your own way 
Not the blinding flash of a rising star
The steady gleam of something that’s endured

You may not blaze like you once did
But you still shine
With the weight of everything you’ve been

A diamond still…

Just one that’s learned what brilliance costs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 11:54 AM
very moving work
Delegans Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 9:45 PM
I appreciate all the visits and compliments. Thank you, Paige.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 10:58 PM
Wow. An amazing poem . Horses are such special animals. Is this a real horse or one you made up. Great tribute to it.
Delegans Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 9:37 PM
It’s loosely based on a real horse a friend of mine owned years ago.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Very nice! Brilliant!
Delegans Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:05 PM
Thank you, Kim. Very nice of you to say.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 3:02 PM
this poem moved me! wow!
Delegans Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:05 PM
Wow, thank you that means a lot.
Smith  Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 1:19 AM
Really felt this poem.
Delegans Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:05 PM
Thank you I’m glad it reached you. Thank you for the nice comment.
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