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Diamond In the Rough

Diamond in the rough, diamond's beauty framed Upon hand of the lady loved by man Lady who wears honor graces her domain Lady possessed, owned: his games began Diamond in the rough cuts to the core Breaking down polished diamond whose surface Begins to crack becoming his captor Fed lies, half-truths, manipulated abased Her confidence destroyed, looking at ring Too tight like life, at least it sparkles still Man_diamond in rough, untamed, would be king Never will be, to dream of change unreal Life being suffocated or life free Choices made will life always this be? Sponsor: Joann Grisetti Contest: Copy Cat Contest Author that inspired: Edna St. Vincent Millay First Line of Poem: Only the diamond and the diamond's dust In the book that I have it is untitled First line of poem used to find the work

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Date: 9/1/2012 10:23:00 AM
sara, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Sara. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:33:00 PM
Big congrats on your win, Sara. You chose one of the best classic poets to emulate for this contest.
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Date: 8/27/2012 1:09:00 PM
A very strong sonnet, with a difficult question. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/9/2012 7:44:00 AM
Another excellent write, Sarah. Good luck and best wishes!
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Date: 8/8/2012 9:52:00 PM
wow Sara, this is a mighty poem... epic and all... i have to come back to this one tomorrow,,,, good night for now...xox~pd
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