Diamond In the Rough

The Diamond in the rough has been lost in the masses of panicked flesh
He looks through the eyes of the unnoticed,
He thinks with the questioning of his being,
He only looks to escape the day

The Diamond in the rough only leaves in the night
bereft of joy he entraps his plight
He makes music alone waiting for pain to escape
he looks in the mirror and cries at his face

the Diamond in the rough he's escaped far away
He's tired of the masses he sticks to like clay
He walks the silk plains and travels alone,he's severed all contact with his past and his home

His potential may be realized and maybe it won't
He writes in his soul what his eyes have absorbed
They hear it and like it but they always want more

His soul's been exchanged by demons in suits
For MTV slots, platinum plaques,drugs,sex, and a bust in a room

The Diamond in the rough,no longer there lies
but he's had enough he's decided to fly

The fame and the fortune has darkened his day
It's tragic, but masses proclaim him cliche'

He knew they would view him as weak,and then scared
Nothing else mattered he was always prepared

He couldn't fear fear any longer inside
Alone in a tower a diamond he died
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Kalonji - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s contest – I apologize for it taking so long for me to say it, God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Amazing and wonderful poem...well done, Congratulations on placing in Nathan's contest!!
Moreno Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 11:19 PM
Kalonji, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul
Leccese Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 8:43 PM
Congratulations on 10th place in my contest! Nate
Guzzi Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Good creative effort! Light & Love
Higgins Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 7:09 PM
Thanks for the support.
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