Raul Moreno Poet Lanterne

Diamond In the Bud

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          ’'’’’       ’’’        ‘’’’’
          ’’’’’’’     ’’’’      ’'’’’’’’
      ’’’’’’’’’’     Buds    ’’’’’’’’’’
  ’’’’’’’’’’’’     Flourish      ’’’’’’’’’’’’
  ’’’’’’’’’’’    Frail petals,    ’’’’’’’’’’’
   ’’’’’’’’   Birthing colors   ’’’’’’’’’
     ’’’’’’’’  ~~BLOOM~~  ’’’’’’’’’
       ’’’’’’’’ \~~~~~~/   ’’’’’’’ 
         ’’’’’’’  \~~~~/  ’’’’’’         
             ’’’’’  \~~/ ’’’’’ '
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*Note: Lanterne/Concrete

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Abe Lopez July 10, 2009 at 11:32 PM such a creative lantern......great job raul

Charmaine Chircop May 31, 2009 at 1:40 AM beautiful art here-awesome---charma

Donna Golden May 30, 2009 at 3:42 PM Amazing creation you have here, Raul! Bravo! Donna

May 30, 2009 at 11:26 AM Wow! This is so creative and artistic. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good weekend. Karen

L'Nass Shango May 26, 2009 at 7:53 AM I love this, it hits the eye like a splash of rain ... pure mastery ... a wonderful exhibition of your genius, my friend.

James Fraser May 25, 2009 at 10:23 AM Oh Wow Raul, where did the insperation come from to do this, its pretty darn amazing. I think its outstanding, and thank you publicly for your advice, James

Hana Ryusaka May 25, 2009 at 9:42 AM I really love the way this looks. It's beautiful and I like the mixing of the two forms. Great job, Raul.

Brian Strand May 25, 2009 at 12:49 AM Raul thanks your for your welcome blog comments also.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand May 25, 2009 at 12:47 AM Wow wow wow Raul.One for my favourites.Nic combination.Rgds Brian thanks for your welcome comments today

Carrie Richards May 24, 2009 at 8:30 PM Another piece of wonderful art/poetry in one !!! Great job! ~ Carrie

Cesar Cantu May 24, 2009 at 7:53 PM Oh dear I love this things!!!! Images talk, indeed, and that was a great experience this night!!! Thanks for the experence!!!! Text delivers a colorful image that goes even farther!!

Michael Jordan May 24, 2009 at 7:14 PM Outstanding Raul - a fav - God Bless,MJ

Justin Presson May 24, 2009 at 5:18 PM i absolutely love form poetry. This is astounding!!! I wish i could post mine here but the formatting makes it difficult. please keep it coming and i admire your creativity and patience. great write!!!

Carolyn Devonshire May 24, 2009 at 5:09 PM Please, take out a paint brush and add some color. This image is so beautiful. I don't know how you do it, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Nathan Leccese May 24, 2009 at 4:03 PM Thanks for supporting my contest. Nate

Brandy Megens May 24, 2009 at 3:26 PM BEAUTIFUL AMAZING AND AWE INSPIRING HOPE YOU WIN