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Diamond in the Bud

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/10/2009 11:32:00 PM
such a creative lantern......great job raul
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Date: 5/31/2009 1:40:00 AM
beautiful art here-awesome---charma
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Date: 5/30/2009 3:42:00 PM
Amazing creation you have here, Raul! Bravo! Donna
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Date: 5/30/2009 11:26:00 AM
Wow! This is so creative and artistic. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:53:00 AM
I love this, it hits the eye like a splash of rain ... pure mastery ... a wonderful exhibition of your genius, my friend.
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:23:00 AM
Oh Wow Raul, where did the insperation come from to do this, its pretty darn amazing. I think its outstanding, and thank you publicly for your advice, James
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Date: 5/25/2009 9:42:00 AM
I really love the way this looks. It's beautiful and I like the mixing of the two forms. Great job, Raul.
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:49:00 AM
Raul thanks your for your welcome blog comments also.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:47:00 AM
Wow wow wow Raul.One for my favourites.Nic combination.Rgds Brian thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:30:00 PM
Another piece of wonderful art/poetry in one !!! Great job! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:53:00 PM
Oh dear I love this things!!!! Images talk, indeed, and that was a great experience this night!!! Thanks for the experence!!!! Text delivers a colorful image that goes even farther!!
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:14:00 PM
Outstanding Raul - a fav - God Bless,MJ
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:18:00 PM
i absolutely love form poetry. This is astounding!!! I wish i could post mine here but the formatting makes it difficult. please keep it coming and i admire your creativity and patience. great write!!!
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:09:00 PM
Please, take out a paint brush and add some color. This image is so beautiful. I don't know how you do it, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2009 4:03:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest. Nate
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Date: 5/24/2009 3:26:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL AMAZING AND AWE INSPIRING HOPE YOU WIN
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