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Diamond In the Bud

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          ’'’’’       ’’’        ‘’’’’
          ’’’’’’’     ’’’’      ’'’’’’’’
      ’’’’’’’’’’     Buds    ’’’’’’’’’’
  ’’’’’’’’’’’’     Flourish      ’’’’’’’’’’’’
  ’’’’’’’’’’’    Frail petals,    ’’’’’’’’’’’
   ’’’’’’’’   Birthing colors   ’’’’’’’’’
     ’’’’’’’’  ~~BLOOM~~  ’’’’’’’’’
       ’’’’’’’’ \~~~~~~/   ’’’’’’’ 
         ’’’’’’’  \~~~~/  ’’’’’’         
             ’’’’’  \~~/ ’’’’’ '
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*Note: Lanterne/Concrete

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Abe Lopez

Date: 7/10/2009 11:32:00 PM

such a creative lantern......great job raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 1:40:00 AM

beautiful art here-awesome---charma

Donna Golden

Date: 5/30/2009 3:42:00 PM

Amazing creation you have here, Raul! Bravo! Donna

Date: 5/30/2009 11:26:00 AM

Wow! This is so creative and artistic. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good weekend. Karen

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 7:53:00 AM

I love this, it hits the eye like a splash of rain ... pure mastery ... a wonderful exhibition of your genius, my friend.

James Fraser

Date: 5/25/2009 10:23:00 AM

Oh Wow Raul, where did the insperation come from to do this, its pretty darn amazing. I think its outstanding, and thank you publicly for your advice, James

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 5/25/2009 9:42:00 AM

I really love the way this looks. It's beautiful and I like the mixing of the two forms. Great job, Raul.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/25/2009 12:49:00 AM

Raul thanks your for your welcome blog comments also.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 5/25/2009 12:47:00 AM

Wow wow wow Raul.One for my favourites.Nic combination.Rgds Brian thanks for your welcome comments today

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/24/2009 8:30:00 PM

Another piece of wonderful art/poetry in one !!! Great job! ~ Carrie

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/24/2009 7:53:00 PM

Oh dear I love this things!!!! Images talk, indeed, and that was a great experience this night!!! Thanks for the experence!!!! Text delivers a colorful image that goes even farther!!

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/24/2009 7:14:00 PM

Outstanding Raul - a fav - God Bless,MJ

Justin Presson

Date: 5/24/2009 5:18:00 PM

i absolutely love form poetry. This is astounding!!! I wish i could post mine here but the formatting makes it difficult. please keep it coming and i admire your creativity and patience. great write!!!