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Diamond Firetail

Tiny finch you land with a beakful
of nesting material spinning 
a pretty crimson tail 
I am motionless, considerate of
any mishap that might interrupt
or cause you to reject my presence

I watch your numerous returns
where with lightning quickness
you successfully organize
into a tiny nest, various grasses,
downy seeds or woolly tufts  
plucked from a grazing sheep-
 
I marvel at your resourcefulness
Your tiny survivability
Your happy twittering
which makes life seem,
suddenly less daunting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Wonderful tribute, Suzanne ~ beautiful
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 9:50 AM
Cool!
Laurie Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Hello Suzanne … when I read the title, I thought aha! Our Diamond Firetail from down under, but the photo changed that, however, your delightful poem of a pretty bird was enjoyable to read - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:43 PM
I have posted the correct picture now. Thanks Laurie
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Hi Lindsay: I did write this about the Australian Diamond Firetail but couldn’t find a picture of one on Pixabay.com Glad you enjoyed my poems today. Always lovely to have your visits. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 2:56 PM
- A beautiful bird ... and a beautiful poem ... I love watching them at the bird feeder in winter, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:52 AM
They are fun to watch....every little antic. Thanks for stopping by. SuZ
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Enjoyed the sweet tone of this ode to a beautiful bird..splendid imagery, SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Thanks Vijay: so happy to hear from you, as always. SuZ
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