Diamond Dreams, ITQ

Before the day turned into night, when the sunbeams whirl out of sight, I'll seize garnet streaks of twilight, let lamps within heart reignite. Above hills of hope where stars sail~ quills powdered with gold shall prevail, and I'll weave this unwritten tale, dress scars of sky with beaded veil. I'm a dreamer, longing to hear, twinkling tunes from an eclipsed sphere, where tides of love wouldn't be a fear, while ivory shores unfold near. I'm the artist of my own night, drawing diamonds from lunar sight.
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Date: 3/27/2024 11:29:00 AM
Ink, you did an amazing job writing this form. Beautiful writing as usual. Congratulations on your top win! Sorry so late I've not been feeling well. Blessings and hugs...Charlie :)
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Date: 3/27/2024 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/wonderful "Diamond Dreams" write. Great ending... Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 3/27/2024 10:03:00 AM
Excellent, and beautiful, congratulations
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Date: 2/7/2024 10:36:00 AM
Quite a quatorzain! Empress, I have spent some time visiting heaps of poets pages looking for stand out gems. I don't have time to comment on all my favorite poet's poems any more ( as my health declines) so this way I get to comment on the most magnificent, and this one fits the bill. It is wonderful. Your rhyming is superb, and the descriptive passages are awe inspiring. I just love everything about it. A true Gem. Best wishes from Wen.
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Date: 2/6/2024 8:39:00 AM
Incredible and majestic poem. Your poem is so well written. As a foreigner, I can never hope to reach such heights.
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Date: 2/5/2024 4:09:00 PM
Beautiful writing- I liked the part about "where tides of love wouldn't be a fear, while ivory shores unfold near" -gorgeous.
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:37:00 AM
I am deeply impressed by your poem, Dear Ink. Your poetic prowess is truly enchanting. I am captivated by the imagery, the seamless flow, the impeccable rhymes, and the carefully selected words in your work. I am immensely grateful for your continuous generosity in sharing your exceptional creativity and talent in the world of poetry. May you always be blessed, my dearest friend, and may your writings continue to be a source of inspiration.
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Date: 2/5/2024 8:44:00 AM
Sunsets give rise to allegorical tales of meaning. The end of light gives rise to a different show during darkness. You get to do whatever your heart tells you and it is very pretty.
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Date: 2/5/2024 12:53:00 AM
the words seem so melodious, just a perfct music, and a dream that brings quite peace to the soul, thanks poet
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Date: 2/4/2024 6:10:00 PM
A magical beauty my dear poet friend Ink. Loving this so much, the image, flow, rhymes and chosen words are all perfect. Your gorgeous poem made me also understand this beautiful form, quatorzain. Thanking you a lot always for sharing your exceptional creativity and talent in poetry. Best wishes to you always my dearest friend and God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 2/4/2024 12:39:00 PM
Your diamond dreams shine my friend: Above hills of hope where stars sail~ quills powdered with gold shall prevail, and I'll weave this unwritten tale--wonderfully poetic depiction, Ink. Much enjoyed this well crafted poem.
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Date: 2/4/2024 12:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem. This sounds like a wonderful way to end the day. Twilight magic
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Date: 2/4/2024 11:58:00 AM
"Drawing those diamonds from above", Very nicely penned
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Date: 2/4/2024 11:21:00 AM
What a lovely poem dear poet and one with wonderful rhymes and flow and you tell that you struggle with rhymes? that is not the case here.... I'm a dreamer longing to hear... are not all of us? I like the independent feel to this poem, especially in the last stanza.. you keep drawing those diamonds and being the light for others.. an excellent take on the contest.. Best of luck in it!
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Date: 2/4/2024 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful, captivating, amazing the depths you take one on in your writings : )
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Date: 2/4/2024 8:24:00 AM
I believe there might be a contest with these Quatorzain going on, if so, this reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Creative lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/4/2024 6:52:00 AM
Before the day turned into night, when the sunbeams whirl out of sight,.. my my!! That opening line!!! dress scars of sky with beaded veil... oooof!! Papi u gonna start to make me melt again!!! I'm the artist of my own night, drawing diamonds from lunar sight. Mmmmmhmmmmm!!! U r my lunar sight!!! This piece just flows like a ripple less river!!! Like a butter on a hot skillet!! Rhymes r so effortlessly woven as well!!! Beautiful artistry!!!
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Date: 2/4/2024 6:27:00 AM
Loving the rhymes …
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