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*Diamond* *Beautiful, bright* *Sparkling, shining, glistening* *Faceted, perfected, inanimate, cold* *Absorbing, crashing, casting* *Drab, dull* *Rock*

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Date: 11/16/2023 8:50:00 AM
Hi Sara, This is a sparkling exhibit from your golden pen. The contrasting segments compliment each other so well. Due in no small part to your immaculate choice of words. I appreciate your generous review of Ample Rose Bush which was another top ten premiere winner in a Brian Strand contest Kind regards Howard
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2023 2:16:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words about my work. I appreciate the time spent here reading my work and taking more time to comment. Sara K
Date: 8/26/2023 7:16:00 PM
Diamond before it is polished is drab and dull, just a rock. But when perfected, it becomes sparkling and glistening! A beautiful diamante !
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Date: 8/27/2023 1:46:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I imagine it takes a good eye to see the potential within that rock. Thanks for the nice review. Sara
Date: 8/23/2023 7:41:00 AM
Superb contrast in your diamente, Sara. We do project our feelings + values onto gemstones. Best wishes, Brian
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2023 1:13:00 PM
Yes, we do, Brian. They are rocks of the earth but some are so beautiful. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 8/22/2023 3:55:00 AM
Oh woww, how breathtaking! I'm loving the wordplay, so pristinely carved in the form Diamante.. You're so creative.. The alliteration gives this a perfect mellifluous tone! Sending love- Hiya :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2023 5:18:00 AM
Why, thank you, Hiya. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 8/21/2023 5:19:00 PM
Very nicely done, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2023 3:01:00 AM
Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 8/20/2023 2:23:00 PM
The shape is right. the discription.But then vs. The rock.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:08:00 AM
Well, I am not speaking about The Corner Stone Rock which the diamond cannot hold up to. Just the ordinary rock it comes from before being shaped, polished, and turned into a thing of beauty. Thank you for dropping by. Sara
Date: 8/20/2023 11:39:00 AM
Sara, your writing is creative with its wonderful style and carefully selected wording. Blessings
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2023 1:17:00 PM
I appreciate the visit, Lasaad. Your comments add a special touch. Sara

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