Ken Carroll Poet Diamante

Diamante

Sunrise
                                                in eastern sky
                                           so lovely in her bones
                                  sun sets in the west I love her more
                        she is my everything I love her more than yesterday
                              a dimensional physicality she is as a diamond
                                        her sensuality awakens me
                                                i am an electron
                                                       drawn

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Len Gasun September 1, 2013 at 1:28 AM Wow! A lovely and perfect write and form my dear friend Ken. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing & your kind visit & inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Ken Carroll September 1, 2013 at 4:09 AM Hi Leonora, Thank you for the lovely comment and for visiting.. Regards, Ken

Sandra Adams August 31, 2013 at 8:10 AM lovely write, you did a great job with this form! Ken Carroll August 31, 2013 at 8:13 AM Hi Sandra, Thank you for stopping by.. Ken

Donna Jones August 30, 2013 at 9:14 PM Beautiful form and poem.. Ken Carroll August 30, 2013 at 9:17 PM Hi Donna, Thank you for the beautiful comment tonight.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2013 at 2:23 PM - Just beautiful, Ken - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ken Carroll August 30, 2013 at 4:51 PM Hi Anne, Thank you.. Ken

Sara Kendrick August 30, 2013 at 8:10 AM Ohhh!! Great expressive and descriptive work..Sara Ken Carroll August 30, 2013 at 8:12 AM Hi Sara, Thank you for stopping by today.. Ken

Eileen Manassian August 30, 2013 at 7:05 AM Beautiful.... sweet! Ken Carroll August 30, 2013 at 7:21 AM Hi Eilleen, Thank you much for the kind compliment.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid August 30, 2013 at 2:41 AM BEAUTIFUL KEN NICELY DONE PAL Ken Carroll August 30, 2013 at 3:02 AM Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for visiting and the wonderful comment.. Ken

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 29, 2013 at 11:35 PM Wow fabulous geophysical diamante, oh i do so luv such poems! Pls do review my latest too. Ken Carroll August 29, 2013 at 11:43 PM Hi S.zaynub, Thank you for stopping by tonight... Regards, Ken..