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he asked her what he could do for her today sought more than merely the dishes need doing sort of reply rather something more deeply intense by the way he had put the dishwasher on already her answer did no surprise him but gathered momentum just be yourself which of course meant you need to find out on your own which is the best way to proceed switching the washing machine on would trip the circuit one step at a time and how he sometimes hated such saying as it is the journey that counts on not the destination patience and coping with uncertainty had not been his forte but he had prayed and meditated on handing over already the delusion of permanence had always held a firm grip with insanity never far away from his soul and mind he sought guidance by handing over with difficulty inhale and exhale and do not suffocate any sentient being life was a bubble and he did not wish to prick the balloon build tensile strength instead and reach out for lustre while darkness had often been a recurring companion there is a crack in everything that’s where the light gets in she was right of course and further advanced on a spiritual path alignment could not and should not be enforced it was a gift of faith action in trust of guidance which starts with a simple question and yet so many answers

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Date: 7/26/2025 9:22:00 AM
Dear Kai, congratulations for your success in Rob's contest with your poignant and potent poem expressed so poetically with thought-provoking and soul-baring finesse. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2025 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I am on a spiritual journey and like to share my poetry on it. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 7/25/2025 6:18:00 AM
Your poetic delivery and the attraction of a mix of words in your vibrant, expressive verse are truly outstanding. Incredibly impactful, and I appreciate the use of imagery all around. Congratulations on your placement!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2025 12:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Sotto Poet. I really appreciate that. XXX
Date: 7/25/2025 6:07:00 AM
This is exactly why I host contest. Thank you and congrats.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2025 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Rob for your comment and for hosting the contest. XXX
Date: 7/25/2025 5:59:00 AM
Congrats on your placement. I enjoyed your poem.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2025 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Richard. Sending you kind wishes, Kai

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