Diagonals a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

DIAGONALS
displaying
  spirituality
once
obscured
&sealed away
death.

 balancing
the  bright
&  bold
yet ephemeral
 possibility
  triggered by
 events
&memories
 discovered
&
considered
in
 too fragile

occasions
with  different
orientation
as
experiments as
  in abstraction
 conceiving
of self
 realised
besides
 intentions
of
modern mores
of correctness
notwithstanding
 raw
primal
reflection
on the sublime
magnitude
so
 overthought

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