James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Diablo Rojo

Off the San Diego coast
In the California sun
Thriving in it's waters
Deters the Scuba divers fun

An invasion from the deep
In thousands they have come
These carnivorous tentacled invertebrates
In mass, their prey succumbs

Whats made this explosion happen
Of these predatory Jumbo Squids
Was it an underground earthquake
That's made them flip their lid

Is there another agenda
That us humans cannot see
Could there be something else that's bigger
That drives them, to you and me

Now this would make a story
Off the San Diego coast
A monster from the deep
Or a prehistoric ghost


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Carolyn Devonshire July 20, 2009 at 4:59 AM Outstanding write, James! I hear the same squid are invading San Francisco Bay! And, yes, we can only wonder what unleashed them from their normal deep sea habitats. I'd love to see a photo of one. I think I saw something not too long ago on TV about one that was captured well offshore. Scientists were struggling to keep it alive for research purposes. Indeed it may have been an underwater earthquake that "made them flip their lids." Love you, Carolyn

John Freeman July 19, 2009 at 5:03 PM James, you've beem busy this day, strange thing, your subject of write! Don't know, maybe you can find out later, God bless Moses THANKS FOR THE CONGRATION!

July 19, 2009 at 11:40 AM Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Sea life has always fascinated me. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2009 at 11:04 AM Love your writing . Did I have the wrong town? Nice twist on the end. Sara