Diabetes

I want I want want
Chocolate on the table
Can't have diabetic

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 25, 2013 at 11:06 AM

Dear Sara, Great Haiku, I feel sorry for any with diabetise.I LOVE Chocolate. Lenore would buy me a box of Chocolate on Valentines Day It was gone in a couple of hours.(I don't share my Chocolate.Superb Pen. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Duncan Chappell

November 7, 2010 at 3:56 PM

oh no bad news here we all the the little delights Sara duncan

Doris Culverhouse

October 6, 2009 at 6:33 AM

my second love

Adeleke Adeite

August 22, 2009 at 7:01 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

James Knox

August 19, 2009 at 2:43 PM

good job sara, congrats on being featured :)

Brandee Augustus

August 19, 2009 at 2:00 PM

I don't know if you meant this to be funny; but I did have a little chuckle with this. Congratulations on your poem being featured.

Diane Christian

August 19, 2009 at 5:03 AM

aww a great poem Sara, my dad was diabetic but he still had chocolate you can get special ones, and jam, he used to monotor himself and his intake and every so often he even had a small cake, congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

James Fraser

August 18, 2009 at 12:22 PM

Congratulations on being featured, Sara>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

August 18, 2009 at 10:50 AM

Sara, I'm pouting and whimpering on your behalf.... It's just NOT fair! Congratulations on having your haiku featured this week. Now, go hide the chocolate from the "torturer" who left it out for you to crave... OK, OK... now you know. There is a bit of a prankster in me. It's an inherited trait... LOL Dane

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 17, 2009 at 4:45 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sara. Love Carol

Carrie Richards

July 5, 2009 at 11:21 AM

My husband too....it is sometimes a difficult road...but he does very well with it, keeps fit, (but once in awhile he just has to cheat...I catch him grabbing chocolate chips from the freezer...! So I know how hard it must be)..Best wishes!