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I return to gather my shards of memory. As a spring bud, obsessed with chilly nights or clammy. Strange things happen above the seats of obscurity Creatures that do not belong here are raised that way. A red rose flees her urge to provide love some dignity. I've run out of names; it's time to turn the key. The seats behind the gap had been creatively ready. We are quietly evoking thoughts spaces of empty. Seats associated with the concept of intimacy. Written June 2021 ALL YOURS (Jun 14) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/16/2021 11:14:00 AM

Hello Lasaad, this poem is deep in thought in words. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2021 4:09:00 PM

Hello Lasaad, I did have a great day. Now enjoying my evening. I hope you have a nice evening my friend.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/16/2021 1:03:00 PM

I'm glad you like it, Darlene, and appreciate your feedback; stay safe and enjoy the rest of your day

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/16/2021 1:32:00 AM

Such a deep poem, loved it. You did very well.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/16/2021 9:42:00 AM

I'm glad you like it, Victor, have a wonderful day

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/15/2021 10:46:00 PM

Deliciously deep Lasaad!

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/16/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thanks, James, I'm happy you like it, appreciate your visit to my page, take care

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thought provoking verse Lasaad, plenty to ponder. Hope you're weekend is going well. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/15/2021 4:11:00 PM

Thanks Tom, it’s delightful to interact with you, your visit to my page is truly appreciated Have a blessed weekend With my best regards

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/15/2021 12:07:00 PM

A captivating poem with stunning imagery, my friend Lasaad. Enjoyed reading. Blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/15/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thanks for your visit Dearest Freind Demetrios; it's always heartwarming to see your wise words stay safe and have a great weekend

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/15/2021 11:29:00 AM

I love your symbolism at work within the physical seats that you so poetically describe, Lasaad. Nice write and enjoyed the read!

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/15/2021 12:04:00 PM

Thanks, Laura; I appreciate your visit and your kind feedback; stay safe and have a wonderful weekend, blessings and regards

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/15/2021 11:25:00 AM

Interesting thoughts on a bench, Lasaad. I wondered if you had freshly painted it.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/15/2021 12:01:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and kind comment, and you know most seasoned is more delightful and holding the shading to hold recollections back from getting lost.