Dewfresh Morn




waking to dewfresh morn 
wet grass bare feet
a hot cup of coffee
sun on my face
dusty scent of roses
star lily sweet
breathe in fresh mountain air
my favorite place!

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Nette Onclaud

July 27, 2025 at 7:13 PM

awww, beautiful except the last line had 5 syls...huggs

Crystol Woods

July 28, 2025 at 4:39 AM

Oh shoot! I revised it and forgot to check the count again! Oh well... thanks for letting me know you liked it! Xoxo

John Fleming

July 27, 2025 at 5:37 AM

How wonderful to be young and full of vigour - and what a marvellous little poem! Enjoy those warm and beautiful sun-kissed morns as often as you can. They are full of precious little moments that never come again. Greatly enjoyed! :) john

Crystol Woods

July 28, 2025 at 4:40 AM

Thank you! Xo