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4th in Vibrations from a Verso Contest (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: July 26th, 2025

Shy as a dewfresh morn
Beam selfish light
Your subdued kisses moist
My petals ache
Captive beauty cloistered
In brittle night
Snapdragons freedom glows
Alas awake!

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Date: 7/31/2025 12:10:00 PM
Awesome imagery. Congrats in the contest.
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/31/2025 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 7/25/2025 5:52:00 AM
Truly beautiful in its simplicity Trina
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/25/2025 8:16:00 AM
Appreciated, Tom. Blessings!

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