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For Brian Strand's Your Choice J Poetry Contest 20 May 2025
* * * * * * * * \ | / \ * / dewdrops on the grass * * * * \|/ tiny mirrors of sunrise ~ \|/ * * * thread light on green lace * * \ * / * * \ * / /\ \ * * / ** \ * */ ** \ */ \|/ || \ | / || \ | / || \ | / || \|/

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Date: 5/22/2025 8:14:00 PM
Sensational both in terms of its hyperbolic meaning and in regard to its delightful impact on my senses. Thank you. A FAVE. Sparkle, Sprinkle and Shine, Gershon
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Date: 5/22/2025 11:17:00 AM
Vividly lovely haiku, JCB. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/20/2025 3:17:00 PM
absolutely delightful! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2025 6:49:00 AM
- Beautiful dewdrops, Jcb :) - hugs
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Date: 5/20/2025 6:21:00 AM
JCB, beautiful and so creative, well done, blessings ~
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Date: 5/20/2025 5:46:00 AM
Beautiful. I agree with Kim here. A winner!
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Date: 5/19/2025 7:07:00 PM
Could be a winner! I love it!
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