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For Brian Strand's Your Choice J Poetry Contest 20 May 2025

dewdrops hiku


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         *      *
          *         *         *     *  
    *      \ | /    \ * / dewdrops on the grass    *
        *   *     * \|/  tiny mirrors of sunrise ~   \|/
      *      * *         thread light on green lace   * *     
          \ * /    * *  \ *  / /\ \ *  * / ** \  * */  **   \ */
           \|/       ||    \ | /   ||   \ | /    ||    \ | /    ||     \|/
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Wolf Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Sensational both in terms of its hyperbolic meaning and in regard to its delightful impact on my senses. Thank you. A FAVE. Sparkle, Sprinkle and Shine, Gershon
Canerdy Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Vividly lovely haiku, JCB. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 3:17 PM
absolutely delightful! hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 6:49 AM
- Beautiful dewdrops, Jcb :) - hugs
La France Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 6:21 AM
JCB, beautiful and so creative, well done, blessings ~
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 5:46 AM
Beautiful. I agree with Kim here. A winner!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 7:07 PM
Could be a winner! I love it!
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