Greg Stanley Poet Quintain (English)

Devour Duck - - - T-A-I-L-S

Men come down for fun,
Duck hover, on edge of dune.
Crowd move down, open gun,
Whop… knock off duck, under moon.   
Cook over ember, devour upon noon.


By: Greg Stanley
December 13, 2011

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Kash Poet February 1, 2012 at 2:45 AM Congratulations Greg.Very good poem with those restrictions.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer January 31, 2012 at 7:41 PM I do love this one Greg! I'm glad you made it in the winner's circle!

Carol Sunshine Brown January 31, 2012 at 1:01 PM Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Greg. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 31, 2012 at 11:16 AM This was a cool poem,Greg! It almost made me feel like I was there (although I would have my qualms with shooting the duck, poor duck, nothing personal to you nor this poem, just me ^_^...), but I would have enjoyed cooking and devouring the duck :)-- Super duper congrats on your win here!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 31, 2012 at 10:43 AM Good one well done congratulations Greg x

Kash Poet January 1, 2012 at 12:33 PM Very nice take on the contest.A winner here.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 14, 2011 at 8:35 PM Greg-What a fun poem! Great job w/ such limited resources! I'm still working on mine...It's been a lot of fun. Much luck to you in the contest...I won't be competing against you b/c I chose heads :)