Valsa George Poet Footle

Devotional Footles

Oh God,	,
Our Lord 

Great King,
We sing.

Eyes raise
Give grace

You lead,
We plead.

Steer life,
From Strife.

Help reap,
Joys deep.

Give bread.
Love spread.

Calm us,
In fears.

Save us,
From tears. 

Our need, 
Do heed.

We bide.
Abide.


April.25. 2023

~ Placed Sixth~

Brian Strand Premiere. No.1211. Poetry Contest

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Susan Ashley April 27, 2023 at 9:37 AM Dearest Valsa, this is such a superb set of spiritual footles! A lovely prayerful flow of faith and inspiration. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 6:41 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Those of us who are believers definitely can feel the spirit within these lines. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

JC Brul April 26, 2023 at 10:55 PM What a Divine set of footles! You did greatly with so much ease and grace. Congrats.

Gershon Wolf April 26, 2023 at 7:49 PM God's neat // Let's eat.

Alexis Y. April 26, 2023 at 6:13 AM Hi Valsa, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your podium win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar April 26, 2023 at 1:55 AM Great spiritual footle. Best for a win.

Joanna Daniel April 25, 2023 at 9:58 PM Wonderful prayer, Valsa, congratulations:)

Stephan McBride April 25, 2023 at 8:12 PM Love it, what a blessing to read today, : ).

Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2023 at 6:15 PM Very nice, Valsa! Sometimes it is the simple prayer! God bless!

Sotto Poet April 25, 2023 at 5:55 PM Valsa you've crafted great footles. Your meticulous choice of metaphors and your flawless syntax provides a further dimension of elegance to the excellent verse you have written. Congrats on your contest win

Vijay Pandit April 25, 2023 at 3:51 PM Solemn vibes you convey throughout, Valsa. Best to you.

Sam Kauffman April 25, 2023 at 12:01 PM I love your footles Valsa. These simple lines always have a greater depth and, in this case, a beautiful prayer from your faithful heart. Congratulations on your win! So beautiful! Sending you blessings of joy on wings of praise!

Daniel Turner April 25, 2023 at 9:06 AM A lovely little prayer, Valsa. I might even have to try and memorize this one:)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 8:59 AM - Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham April 25, 2023 at 8:01 AM Brilliant string of footles Valsa, you compose these so well. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Yann Rolland April 25, 2023 at 7:26 AM just an inspiring poem, God bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 7:19 AM - Lovely footle, Valsa :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Alexis Y. April 25, 2023 at 6:52 AM It WoW! Valsa, Your devotional footles are written so well. They have a nice rhythm and flow. I am happy I stopped by your page this morning. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day. PS, have you heard of First 15?