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Devotional Footles

Oh God, , Our Lord Great King, We sing. Eyes raise Give grace You lead, We plead. Steer life, From Strife. Help reap, Joys deep. Give bread. Love spread. Calm us, In fears. Save us, From tears. Our need, Do heed. We bide. Abide. April.25. 2023 ~ Placed Sixth~ Brian Strand Premiere. No.1211. Poetry Contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/27/2023 9:37:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, this is such a superb set of spiritual footles! A lovely prayerful flow of faith and inspiration. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2023 6:41:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Those of us who are believers definitely can feel the spirit within these lines. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/26/2023 10:55:00 PM

What a Divine set of footles! You did greatly with so much ease and grace. Congrats.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/26/2023 7:49:00 PM

God's neat // Let's eat.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/26/2023 6:13:00 AM

Hi Valsa, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your podium win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2023 1:55:00 AM

Great spiritual footle. Best for a win.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/25/2023 9:58:00 PM

Wonderful prayer, Valsa, congratulations:)

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/25/2023 8:12:00 PM

Love it, what a blessing to read today, : ).

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2023 6:15:00 PM

Very nice, Valsa! Sometimes it is the simple prayer! God bless!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/25/2023 5:55:00 PM

Valsa you've crafted great footles. Your meticulous choice of metaphors and your flawless syntax provides a further dimension of elegance to the excellent verse you have written. Congrats on your contest win

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2023 3:51:00 PM

Solemn vibes you convey throughout, Valsa. Best to you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/25/2023 12:01:00 PM

I love your footles Valsa. These simple lines always have a greater depth and, in this case, a beautiful prayer from your faithful heart. Congratulations on your win! So beautiful! Sending you blessings of joy on wings of praise!

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/25/2023 9:06:00 AM

A lovely little prayer, Valsa. I might even have to try and memorize this one:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2023 8:59:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/25/2023 8:01:00 AM

Brilliant string of footles Valsa, you compose these so well. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/25/2023 7:26:00 AM

just an inspiring poem, God bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2023 7:19:00 AM

- Lovely footle, Valsa :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/25/2023 6:52:00 AM

It WoW! Valsa, Your devotional footles are written so well. They have a nice rhythm and flow. I am happy I stopped by your page this morning. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day. PS, have you heard of First 15?