Devotional Beauty

Cathedral of limbs,
Prayers from a leaden pew:
The butterfly prays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Another gem Raul, you certainly are the master of these writes, like many have said before >> James
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January 15, 2010 at 3:51 PM
Your poetry made excellent reading today Raul. Thank you for sharing. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 2:33 PM
EXcellent!
Walker Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Thank you very much for yor comment.Btw,that was a nice poem.
Pickett Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 10:56 AM
The Haiku king.... What is good my friend??? As always, your poetry inspires a thought.... I thank you for that.....:JP]
Richards Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Spirtual, paints the most lovely picture in my mind. Love, Carrie
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January 15, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Very interesting haiku, Raul. Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Sheart Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 5:56 AM
I can dwell on this beautiful thought! A great Haiku! Love Light Patty
Knop Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Hi Raúl! A mi me gusta especially the first line: "Cathedral of limbs". Well written Haiku and thans for your comments. Hope you'll be having a ver FELIZ ANO NUEVO!..Gert
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