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Cathedral of limbs, Prayers from a leaden pew: The butterfly prays.

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Date: 1/16/2010 3:03:00 PM
Another gem Raul, you certainly are the master of these writes, like many have said before >> James
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:51:00 PM
Your poetry made excellent reading today Raul. Thank you for sharing. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2010 2:33:00 PM
EXcellent!
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Date: 1/15/2010 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for yor comment.Btw,that was a nice poem.
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:56:00 AM
The Haiku king.... What is good my friend??? As always, your poetry inspires a thought.... I thank you for that.....:JP]
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Date: 1/15/2010 7:40:00 AM
Spirtual, paints the most lovely picture in my mind. Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:56:00 AM
Very interesting haiku, Raul. Nice work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:56:00 AM
I can dwell on this beautiful thought! A great Haiku! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:23:00 AM
Hi Raúl! A mi me gusta especially the first line: "Cathedral of limbs". Well written Haiku and thans for your comments. Hope you'll be having a ver FELIZ ANO NUEVO!..Gert
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