Devotional

Western heaven 
Twenty four hours: His

Sunset moonrise

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Charlotte Puddifoot

October 25, 2024 at 2:07 PM

a vivid image, nice wordplay on 'sunset moonrise'...thanks for your continued support of my work

Arlo Parker

October 26, 2024 at 9:29 AM

Inspiration vs. personal muse: universal poetic device. Just write when you must. 10/day seems absurd (especially every day!). My inspired muse barely moves three per week. :o//

Charlotte Puddifoot

October 26, 2024 at 3:55 AM

i don't choose what gets written, i just go wherever the muse takes me, and posting lots of poems isn't my style

Arlo Parker

October 25, 2024 at 4:24 PM

I can't support unless you submit poems. Looking forward to pieces that celebrate your "after life". Such a fine poet. :o))