Line Gauthier Poet Monorhyme

Devotion Potion

Enthralled by the notion
A mermaid could set in motion
Such powerful devotion
Causing ludic commotion
She offers an elixir of love potion
Stirring powerful emotion
Feels much like an implosion
Monsooning into an explosion
Down to the bottom of the ocean



AP: 2nd place 2025

Submitted on August 4, 2019 for contest DEVOTION TO OCEAN sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE  -  RANKED 1ST

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Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2019 at 8:43 PM A fun and active write! Congratulations, Line! Line Gauthier August 17, 2019 at 9:08 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 3:26 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier August 16, 2019 at 5:36 AM Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper August 15, 2019 at 9:47 PM Congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs Line Gauthier August 15, 2019 at 9:59 PM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong August 15, 2019 at 4:01 PM I LOVE your beautiful monorhyme Line! Simply enchanting! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : ) xxoo Line Gauthier August 15, 2019 at 6:11 PM Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Geoffrey Brewer August 5, 2019 at 3:46 PM You are the queen of the monorhyme, Line. Delightful Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:05 PM LOL thanks for the wonderful compliment, Geoffrey.

Alkas Poetry August 5, 2019 at 6:18 AM Splendid work dear Line... i once felt this implosion when i fell in love for a girl... She was the greatest love in my life... True love is the great potion... Very well written... salute alkas Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 6:38 AM How sweet, Alkas. Thank you. Our true loves forever remain in our hearts.

Caren Krutsinger August 4, 2019 at 5:59 PM The Mermaid Mother of Monorhymes Line! Line Gauthier August 4, 2019 at 6:32 PM LOL I do love a fun monorhyme.

Jeanne Mcgee August 4, 2019 at 12:46 AM Very cute the commotions caused...love it. Jeanne Mcgee August 15, 2019 at 11:38 PM Congrats Line...so well deserved win! Line Gauthier August 4, 2019 at 12:48 AM Thanks, Jeanne.