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Devotion Potion

Enthralled by the notion A mermaid could set in motion Such powerful devotion Causing ludic commotion She offers an elixir of love potion Stirring powerful emotion Feels much like an implosion Monsooning into an explosion Down to the bottom of the ocean Submitted on August 4, 2019 for contest DEVOTION TO OCEAN sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE - RANKED 1ST

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2019 8:43:00 PM

A fun and active write! Congratulations, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2019 9:08:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2019 3:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2019 5:36:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2019 9:47:00 PM

Congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2019 9:59:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/15/2019 4:01:00 PM

I LOVE your beautiful monorhyme Line! Simply enchanting! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2019 6:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/5/2019 3:46:00 PM

You are the queen of the monorhyme, Line. Delightful

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:05:00 PM

LOL thanks for the wonderful compliment, Geoffrey.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/5/2019 6:18:00 AM

Splendid work dear Line... i once felt this implosion when i fell in love for a girl... She was the greatest love in my life... True love is the great potion... Very well written... salute alkas

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 6:38:00 AM

How sweet, Alkas. Thank you. Our true loves forever remain in our hearts.