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DEVOTION POTION



Enthralled by the notion
A mermaid could set in motion
Such powerful devotion
Causing ludic commotion
She offers an elixir of love potion
Stirring powerful emotion
Feels much like an implosion
Monsooning into an explosion
Down to the bottom of the ocean



Submitted on August 4, 2019, for contest DEVOTION TO OCEAN sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE  -  RANKED 1ST

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Date: 8/17/2019 8:43:00 PM
A fun and active write! Congratulations, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 8/16/2019 3:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2019 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/15/2019 9:47:00 PM
Congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2019 9:59:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/15/2019 4:01:00 PM
I LOVE your beautiful monorhyme Line! Simply enchanting! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : ) xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2019 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/5/2019 3:46:00 PM
You are the queen of the monorhyme, Line. Delightful
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:05:00 PM
LOL thanks for the wonderful compliment, Geoffrey.
Date: 8/5/2019 6:18:00 AM
Splendid work dear Line... i once felt this implosion when i fell in love for a girl... She was the greatest love in my life... True love is the great potion... Very well written... salute alkas
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 6:38:00 AM
How sweet, Alkas. Thank you. Our true loves forever remain in our hearts.
Date: 8/4/2019 5:59:00 PM
The Mermaid Mother of Monorhymes Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 6:32:00 PM
LOL I do love a fun monorhyme.
Date: 8/4/2019 12:46:00 AM
Very cute the commotions caused...love it.
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 8/15/2019 11:38:00 PM
Congrats Line...so well deserved win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 12:48:00 AM
Thanks, Jeanne.