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Devotion Poem My Pleas

Devotion Poem. MY PLEAS (For Jim) *** I’ll call out for you All the enchanted, The splendors all usually unwitnessed by the average day’s Noticed sights and The sweeter songs blue butterflies hear, and which sound unto Composers’ ears days before they’re written. I’ll plead colors of joy encircle you like a Future-come more Than this present noon… A future drawing of itself Reborn, with you A Phoenix rising On the dawn of peace. This is a poem that has no end… and as I wait, will please find none. ————————————————- (c) sally young Eslinger 10/7/21

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Date: 10/8/2021 9:33:00 PM
So meaningful and lovely, Sally. Very much enjoyed!
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/9/2021 8:48:00 AM
Thank you. Evelyn! Your words are always so supportive for me. Xoxo God bless you
Date: 10/8/2021 10:11:00 AM
Jim must be so special!! Beautiful, Sally.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/9/2021 9:08:00 AM
Andrea, hahaha Jim is wonderful. Esp such loving sacrificial caretaker of me sine my coma 2018, & my paralysis 15 mos ago.BUT it was God’s fated coupling of us that is so amazing.I should write THAT timeline poem. Thanks and take care!
Date: 10/8/2021 9:34:00 AM
A wonderful devotion poem Sally… Belle
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/9/2021 8:56:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much! Sorry I got my replies out of order! Belle, check my reply beside Connie…
Date: 10/8/2021 9:13:00 AM
This is beautiful Sally. Blessings xxoo
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/9/2021 8:52:00 AM
Oh thank you so much, Belle. I so respect your work and your comment uplifts my day. Blessings!
Date: 10/8/2021 1:14:00 AM
Beautiful feelings in your poem. Great imagery.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/9/2021 9:00:00 AM
Victor, due to you, I am working on becoming a better imagist. I thank you for your support and inspiration! Love, sally

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