Devotion and Infatuation

They didn't have to think 
unwavering devotion 
no words between them, 
there wasn't a great need for them 
just an infatuation.


7/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Wonderful are the days when there was no need to talk :)
Williams Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Oh to be young and infatuated. A great write Eve,good luck in the contest...Maria hugs
Dutta Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Well defined. So nice to read.
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Nicely done, Eve. I can't wait to see all the results on this contest. hoping i make the list and you too!
Krampe Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 3:16 PM
nice take on the prompt, Eve. Good luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 3:01 PM
- Lovely written, dear Eve :) - Best winner wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ajmal Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:42 AM
It is a really lovely tanka written by you, good luck in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 5:47 PM
A great tanka Eve! Infatuation feels like love but never lasts but the memories do. : )
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 11:11 AM
sweet is a fling which thrills... lovely work, eve..huggs
Man Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:49 AM
I love every line of this romantic write, Eve!
Pandit Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:34 AM
This must be one of those special moments..well captured Eve!
Rose  Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:15 AM
Infatuation does not require much thought. and stars in your eyes of course. Nice one Eve. Have a great day. psst don't let your pen run out of ink,
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:57 AM
lovely tanka Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:19 AM
Sometimes no words are needed, the chemistry is just spot on.
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:23 AM
and isn't that a wonderful feeling!!!! if only it lasted forever!!! :)
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