Devotion

seed time and blackthorn hedges dusted off winter 

hibernation lost its sleepy crown and laid to rest

inward turn of events that simmered in the cold

as daffodils shed their woolen hats and mittens

opened their crowns to bluebell’s wedding vows


a violet haze rose from the mist in lavender bloom

witness to the union of undying warmth made in heaven 

crocus offered saffron and danced to poppy’s delight

stinging nettle though uninvited lured butterflies


blue skies applauded

not a single cloud in sight -

loved tender kiss


I take you my sacred partner for better or worse

poorer and richer impermanent and until the end

for when we are dead we still had springs in our step


holy word showers

love pure kindness compassion -

a canvas of bliss


11th March 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 4:54 AM
Creative winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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March 13, 2021 at 10:00 AM
How nice it is to see someone write about their devotion to their mate, Kai. You sound like a well-matched couple. Congrats on finding "bliss"! Hugs, Carolyn
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Consider entering my latest contest. I would be interested in your perspective.
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March 13, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Good for you. My second book is now in second print. Have you considered the ebook option? I did both and it seems to have been a good choice.
Kendrick Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 6:15 AM
I like the descriptiveness of this one. Some very Haiku within. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:11 PM
I enjoyed this piece, you haven’t lost your poetic chop. Blessings Rick. Finger snaps galore!
Neumann Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 4:20 AM
Thank you Richard. I keep chopping away ...I am also about to finish my second novel, which is a crime story that takes place in Hamburg, Germany. Still have not found a publisher for the first one, which is a political satire, but I enjoy writing them. Kind wishes, Kai
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March 12, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Lovely poem. I enjoyed. God bless you with love, Gina
Neumann Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Thank you Gina.
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