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Devoid of Birth

I am a butterfly
without conversion
flying in the sky
immersion

I have eternal life
for that is promised
I skipped the wildlife
I am the calmest

I was given wings of glory
so that I avoided transformation
this is my story
hence your acclimation

Copyright © Angela Crabtree | Year Posted 2020

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Paul Callus Date: 12/14/2020 1:50:00 PM I have a feeling this could have been both personification and a metaphor, Angela. They both work for me in a delightful way. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 12/14/2020 6:58:00 PM Thank you, Paul :)

JCB Brul Date: 10/10/2020 5:33:00 PM Very evocative poem dear Angela. i love how you personify butterfly in such s subtle way. Great piece! Keep coming. Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 10/10/2020 7:34:00 PM Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it. I love butterflies. I wish I could see more of them :)

Michelle Faulkner Date: 10/10/2020 12:22:00 PM An eternal butterfly, in eternal glory, a wonderful write! Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 10/10/2020 7:29:00 PM Thank you, Michelle. I really appreciate you visiting my page and reading my poetry :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/10/2020 5:15:00 AM Your imagination shines, Angela. Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 10/10/2020 9:15:00 AM Thank you, Vijay. I just write what comes to my mind :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/10/2020 12:57:00 AM Ah, so Coleridge-like, and he is my favorite poet of all. Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 10/10/2020 9:17:00 AM Thank you, Caren. I had to look it up to see what you were talking about. I'm only familiar with Shakesphere and a couple of others. :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/9/2020 10:47:00 PM Butterflies are so beautiful. ~~ Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 10/10/2020 9:19:00 AM Yes they are. I don't see very many anymore. They were always around when I was a child. Thank you, Victor for commenting. I always appreciate your visit. :)