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Devoid of Birth

I am a butterfly without conversion flying in the sky immersion I have eternal life for that is promised I skipped the wildlife I am the calmest I was given wings of glory so that I avoided transformation this is my story hence your acclimation

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2020 1:50:00 PM

I have a feeling this could have been both personification and a metaphor, Angela. They both work for me in a delightful way. ~ Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/14/2020 6:58:00 PM

Thank you, Paul :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/10/2020 5:33:00 PM

Very evocative poem dear Angela. i love how you personify butterfly in such s subtle way. Great piece! Keep coming.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/10/2020 7:34:00 PM

Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it. I love butterflies. I wish I could see more of them :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/10/2020 12:22:00 PM

An eternal butterfly, in eternal glory, a wonderful write!

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/10/2020 7:29:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle. I really appreciate you visiting my page and reading my poetry :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/10/2020 5:15:00 AM

Your imagination shines, Angela.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/10/2020 9:15:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I just write what comes to my mind :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/10/2020 12:57:00 AM

Ah, so Coleridge-like, and he is my favorite poet of all.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/10/2020 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Caren. I had to look it up to see what you were talking about. I'm only familiar with Shakesphere and a couple of others. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/9/2020 10:47:00 PM

Butterflies are so beautiful. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/10/2020 9:19:00 AM

Yes they are. I don't see very many anymore. They were always around when I was a child. Thank you, Victor for commenting. I always appreciate your visit. :)