Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Devoid of Birth

I am a butterfly
without conversion
flying in the sky
immersion

I have eternal life
for that is promised
I skipped the wildlife
I am the calmest

I was given wings of glory
so that I avoided transformation
this is my story
hence your acclimation

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Paul Callus December 14, 2020 at 1:50 PM I have a feeling this could have been both personification and a metaphor, Angela. They both work for me in a delightful way. ~ Regards // paul Angela Crabtree December 14, 2020 at 6:58 PM Thank you, Paul :)

JC Brul October 10, 2020 at 5:33 PM Very evocative poem dear Angela. i love how you personify butterfly in such s subtle way. Great piece! Keep coming. Angela Crabtree October 10, 2020 at 7:34 PM Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it. I love butterflies. I wish I could see more of them :)

Michelle Faulkner October 10, 2020 at 12:22 PM An eternal butterfly, in eternal glory, a wonderful write! Angela Crabtree October 10, 2020 at 7:29 PM Thank you, Michelle. I really appreciate you visiting my page and reading my poetry :)

Vijay Pandit October 10, 2020 at 5:15 AM Your imagination shines, Angela. Angela Crabtree October 10, 2020 at 9:15 AM Thank you, Vijay. I just write what comes to my mind :)

Caren Krutsinger October 10, 2020 at 12:57 AM Ah, so Coleridge-like, and he is my favorite poet of all. Angela Crabtree October 10, 2020 at 9:17 AM Thank you, Caren. I had to look it up to see what you were talking about. I'm only familiar with Shakesphere and a couple of others. :)

Victor Buhagiar October 9, 2020 at 10:47 PM Butterflies are so beautiful. ~~ Angela Crabtree October 10, 2020 at 9:19 AM Yes they are. I don't see very many anymore. They were always around when I was a child. Thank you, Victor for commenting. I always appreciate your visit. :)