Devoid

Barren sullen devoid of all color Blank canvas plastered But Ill equipped inequities Of casual sexual diversity Allow my first stroke Male model well equipped Brush pales in size to the Instrument God equipped Him with Ahh. Mmmm Sun setting behind City’s skyline stars peeking

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/29/2020 5:20:00 AM

Very interesting...

Franci Hoffman

Date: 3/31/2020 12:11:00 PM

Fascinating piece and I love that it can take the reader anywhere he or she may want to be.

Kelli White
Date: 3/31/2020 6:49:00 PM

Yes indeed, lol such is the desire of the reader, love kelli

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 3/30/2020 9:44:00 PM

Oil obviously, thick, glossy and room temperature...not water colours, that wash off you easily. x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/3/2020 3:50:00 PM

When all else fails, sometimes the more interesting project is to paint yourself. Take that as you will, lol. I literally painted myself once, written on the body, words in three dimension, fascinating concept, the sheets were a real mess. x

Kelli White
Date: 3/31/2020 8:56:00 AM

Yes Lady L sometimes the person is the painting hence the blank board lol. Love Kelli

Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/30/2020 9:05:00 PM

Ahh. Mmmm Sun setting behind City’s skyline stars peeking. lol Thank you for this entertaining poem JC Hawkens

Kelli White
Date: 3/31/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thank you JC , love kelli

Allright Poet

Date: 3/29/2020 2:39:00 AM

Where the mind goes the poet writes. A true meaningful hidden instrumental words of sensuality.

John Gondolf

Date: 3/26/2020 2:11:00 PM

I enjoyed this sensual piece, Kelli, I have always enjoyed letting my mind wander where it will. Hugs, John

Kelli White
Date: 3/26/2020 2:13:00 PM

Lol. One never knows. Thank you again. Kelli

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 3/25/2020 3:29:00 PM

Love it. Must pull out the paints and brushes again, isolation is a wonderful thing sometimes. x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/30/2020 9:40:00 PM

LOL. Deffo....nothing worse than a talker. Where's the whip? I can see it placed gingerly on the canvas sheet at his feet, while he sits in solitary contemplation, oiled and bronzed, Rodin. Back at you. x

Kelli White
Date: 3/25/2020 5:08:00 PM

Yes and have a formidable mute male model at hand lol. Love you LL, kelli

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/25/2020 11:36:00 AM

The new 'test question:' Is it bigger than an artist's brush?! … There you go...

Kelli White
Date: 3/25/2020 5:12:00 PM

I think it depends on the hallucinogenic capabilities at hand such as E, liquid acid, or marijuana laced with your choice to entice and escalate your artistic ability. Love Kelli??

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/25/2020 9:11:00 AM

Very well written poem! Warp, tempting , sensual dearest, Kell! Take good care!

Kelli White
Date: 3/25/2020 5:20:00 PM

Ty so much DT. Provocative exploration never hurt anyone. Love Kelli.