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Devil In Da' Skies

“Hello, January.” “Hello, David. Why do you shiver so?” “Because, January, you’re the devil in disguise.” “If you’re in a deep freeze, David, then I’m not hiding anything.” “In that case, January, you are the devil in da’ skies.” “Well, David, if July is the heaven above, then you do the math.” “January, I just wanted you to know that you’re the devil to dis’ guy.” “Thank you, David. It’s so nice to get a chilling compliment from you.” For Hello January contest

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Date: 1/21/2014 8:46:00 AM
Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, David
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Date: 1/20/2014 2:34:00 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem, David. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2014 12:31:00 PM
A clever poem. Congratulations on your win with this entry.
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Date: 1/20/2014 9:08:00 AM
I love this - how you've turned the conservations very poetic and entertaining. Well done David!
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:26:00 PM
haha, this was VERY clever. Devilishly so!!!
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Date: 1/15/2014 2:44:00 PM
Very nice play on words David. Thank you also for your comment. Take care.
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:57:00 PM
I like your play on the word disguise.. Enjoyed your write...best wishes in the contest
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Date: 1/13/2014 6:43:00 PM
nice write David, like the play on words
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