David Crandall Poet Rhyme

Devil Breeze

Of my lifetime home, Los Angeles,
I now reminisce,
and think how you, devil breeze, 
caused a thing like this.
All the neighborhoods I've lived,  
their plight is now dire. 
I don't think I can forgive
you for all these fires.

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Karen Jones January 8, 2025 at 10:26 PM So sad and heartbreaking that five people have died so far! I didn’t know you are from California. David Crandall January 8, 2025 at 10:42 PM Yes, it's sad. I'm lucky. A few years ago, I moved a short distance away where I am safe, but some of my friends, not so fortunate. My heart goes out to the folks in those neighborhoods, and sorry to see familiar landmarks disappear.