Wilma Neels Poet Enclosed Rhyme

'determined Guardian'

What do you do when she’s born two months early?
Nothing in place but cute baby clothes
Wishing we could at least kiss her on her nose
While in the incubator she had us in a scurry

Expecting a boy, peering through the glass was a girl
So my folks asked the two nurses for suggestions
They just smiled and didn’t have any objections
So I ended up as Wilma Nolene in a twirl

Mom and dad were quite happy
Little old me had no say
Only saw mom for the first time on New Year’s Day
My name, I think is quite savvy

I wish I could meet those two ladies
Whose names I now do carry
I would take them out to someplace splashy
Just to say thank you for looking after us babies

Wilma derived from William
Meaning determined keeper
I can be a real teaser
At times a bit fearsome...

*a true story, two nurses named me*

Contest: What's In A Name
3rd Place

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Michael J. Falotico March 5, 2011 at 7:06 AM Congrats my dear sweet Poet friend for life..luv Michael

Kash Poet March 5, 2011 at 6:21 AM This a wonderful write on your beautiful name Wilma!Congrats on your big win !---kashinath

Joe Maverick March 4, 2011 at 10:26 AM great write about your birth circumstance and how you were named Wilma, all the best.

Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2011 at 4:24 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan March 4, 2011 at 12:13 AM I love your name Wima dear. It somehow suits you. many warm congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2011 at 1:46 PM what a cool way to get your name, Wilma. Nolene is unique too! Congratulation on your win. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta March 3, 2011 at 12:10 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Wilma

Francine Roberts March 3, 2011 at 9:59 AM pretty name , the two go together well, congrats on your win in the contest Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 3, 2011 at 9:30 AM Congrats Wilma on your third place win in my contest What's in a Name with this superb entry luv.. thankxx for your ever constant support....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 27, 2011 at 2:14 PM Awesome story Wilma.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write ... good luck if for any contest my friend ..luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 20, 2011 at 11:58 PM ohhh-- I think I need more sleep-- sorry about that missy-- I made a super typo with weeks (haha getting ALL the letters wrong) I really meant months-- didn't you see?? ;) heehee-- hugs miss early by two months :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 20, 2011 at 9:59 AM nopey, you never told me (or you did? and I forgot?! but I know you didn't?) and haha, fine then tell your mom I said you were born 2 weeks late instead...;) well me I have to catch that train to lala land, thanks for really liking that line-- haha I was supposed to cut off that line but I really wanted that line, so I let it stay there :) --ttys :) hugs :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 20, 2011 at 9:45 AM aww, never knew that two nurses named you! That is one sweet story! and hmmm me thinks that you were just too excited to live in this world that's why you arrived two weeks early ;) that & you were excited to be your mom & dad's Christmas gift :D-- really like your name-- and Nolene is a very pretty & unique name too :D btw the meaning behind your name is so strong! Enjoyed reading this :) Linda sure is going to have a tough time with judging! hugs to you :) btw thanks for your great comments

Michael J. Falotico February 20, 2011 at 5:33 AM I love this story of "Wilma" the child and future poet.. Thank you for sharing the begining of your life with us... I thank your Mom and Dad for you...luv Michael

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 19, 2011 at 9:18 PM A nice story and well written. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Kash Poet February 19, 2011 at 7:06 PM wonderful write Wilma!Goodluck in the contest. pS:WILMA is a beautiful name.

Carolyn Devonshire February 19, 2011 at 3:38 PM How interesting your parents decided to name you after the nurses, Wilma! They were blessed that you were born early and still survived to become the remarkable lady you are today. If this is for the "what's in a name" contest, I think it will be a winner! Love and best wishes always, Carolyn

Daver Austin February 19, 2011 at 1:56 PM Didn't Buck Rpgers have a girlfriend named Wilma. Remember Dr. Huer (with his bald head) Don't know about the other name. Charming piece, Wilma. If you're old enough to remember Buck Rpgers and his Wilma. Hey! You aint no baby no mo. Love, Dave

Audrey Haick February 19, 2011 at 12:40 PM What an interesting and beautiful entry for Linda's Contest, dear Wilma! I can't get myself in the mood to write about my name. Both my parents love Audrey Hepburn..but Papa loved her even more lol so that's how "Audrey" came about. And wouldn't you know, when I was in my teens, I so wanted to be an actress, too. Nothing interesting there! Hence, no inspiration...lol Best of luck in the contest, my friend! Love ya! Annalise

Sara Kendrick February 19, 2011 at 12:16 PM Great informative write about your name..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon so that I could learn a little tidbit about your name..Good luck with this sure winner...Sara

Robert Pettit February 19, 2011 at 11:26 AM Nice example of an enclosed rhyme poem. Thanks for letting us know how you acquired your name.