Determined

I’m trying to achieve consummate prudence But I’ll need to avoid all the pollutants that impeded My spiritual movement Diligent in faith and prayer But when I approach the cashier I’m told to “remain steadfast and austere” I'm resigned to do His will As I place my hand on the wheel And take my pep pill

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/17/2015 6:17:00 PM

Dear Lara, today there is so much going on in the world that can distract us from our important goals in life. We just have to keep our eyes on the prize and with God's help and guidance, we will succeed! I love this very inspirational write, my friend! It's a 7! Blessings to you! Pandita

Lara Wash
Date: 2/12/2016 7:07:00 PM

Hi Pandita, if we can just stay on the straight and narrow everything will be just fine. Thank you so very much for reading my poetry. May your cup run over with blessings!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/13/2015 9:45:00 AM

Excellent pen Lara! Faith and prayer that works.Very nice piece.A7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) D.

Lara Wash
Date: 12/13/2015 12:54:00 PM

Thank you very kindly Dorian, your comment is motivational, may you be inundated with blessings.