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Determined

i have not ideal where to start but if there be i'll find the key to your heart if buried under Saharan sand i'd sift the grains between my hand's seperate searched from unsearched sand continue my search untill i hold it in my hand for determined i am determined i am to search desert sand to prove i am a man to make you understand that you are part of my plan most men search for riches and gold but i search for you in summer heat or winter cold for you i have this bravery for you i am so bold to walk the distance to spend the hours to rescue you from witches tower and carry you away i can not flee the spell of you being the one my sprit choose Saharan sand seems a small part of the earth for such a great thing i'd search the whole world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/10/2009 8:53:00 PM
Now that is what I call determination for the sake of love. Great write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:48:00 PM
I love your determination and your poem. She's a lucky lady. Good for you! It's one of my favs.
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Date: 10/9/2009 11:22:00 AM
thats very deep follow your heart
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:48:00 PM
Hi John Love your sentiments in this amazing poem. It congers up so many vivid images. I love the desert. Nice place to visit especially in the alaskan winter. My idea of the desert is the grand canyon but the sahara desert I'm sure is just as beautiful....The sand is a lot hotter ha! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:10:00 PM
True, Sahara desert is nothing in front of this great write!
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:03:00 PM
Wonderful poem John. Am glad to see you once again....The Southern Belle
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:35:00 PM
love your determination to find the key to this heart pumping in your vision,the Sahara Desert always mesmerize me,excellent write John once more--a gem--Charma
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:08:00 PM
Such a determination John, your searching the saharan sand, rescue from the witches tower, the boldness, and the hours spent.Smile, Sincerely Moses
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