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DETERMINATION At any rate, somehow I must sail on, just now. Night may be too dark, Yet, small stars will spark. Dusty gust may haply come. Thunderbolts, I ‘ll welcome. On tide, boat ‘ll swing and sway. Yet, I ‘ll try to find my way. Lone sailor, holds faith firm. Excitement is only charm Cloudy weather: I may be lost. Yet, I ‘ll sail on at any cost. By any means, I ‘ll explore Boat may sink, not to deplore. Determination is my pride. The night meant for boat-ride. 02/11/18 Edited on 05/18/20 Third Place BRIAN'S CHOICE K' Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/20/2020 10:09:00 AM
such a nice flow and rhythm Anisha. wonderful.
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Date: 6/9/2018 1:24:00 AM
DETERMINATION indeed but you need to revise some of the lines I guess English is not your first language but very good
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Date: 2/11/2018 1:49:00 PM
If you stop you stop breathing...A poem of life...All the best Anisha
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:12:00 PM
love the sailing it felt comforting.. enjoyed reading, Anisha.. luck in the contest.. Hugs
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