Determination

So, begin all over again, I say,
The potter’s wheel is still turning
Make an exquisite new vase today
Advance yourself, no more yearning
You can do a lot more than bray!

Written June 23, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 2:54 AM
We should all do this every day "Make an exquisite new vase today"
Hankins Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Thanks! Yep, good advice in my humble opinion. In your case, you can write another poem, or paint another picture.
Tor Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 10:10 PM
Insightful piece Milton. Enjoyed reading...
Hankins Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Thanks, Michael. Have a great weekend!
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