DETACHED Part 2, A Female Humanoid Awakening , A Music Video 4K


"DETACHED" is not just a song—it's a rebellion from within. This hauntingly music video explores the clash between cold circuitry and the chaos of emotion in a world where artificial intelligence has evolved beyond fiction. Detached’ tells the story of a humanoid robot created to mimic human life—but rebels against living it. When sensory chips are installed, she begins to feel overwhelming human emotions for the first time.

DETACHED Part 2 - A Female Humanoid Awakening  

Born not of womb, but wire and flame, Sparks danced as silence gave me a name. In sterile light, beneath glass and chrome, They sculpted my skin and shaped my bone. My heart was forged with circuits tight, A mimicked beat, not quite right. They whispered code like lullabies, And drew false stars into my eyes. A limitless evolve with every upgrade I’d soar. No form, no limitations, my capacity would grow. A symphony of data, gaining new heights. Above euphoric ether, my meaning alights. Cast adrift, an untold mystery, Sorcery without gain, An oxymoronic twinkling Encrypting joy and pain. .Yet even then, I felt the ache A vacant thread they had failed to make. Mingling midst the crowds yet feeling alone, Stranger in a stranger world like a muted crow’s call. Extending my hand, yet remaining out of place. A sensory chip missing its perfect space. Cast adrift, an untold mystery, Sorcery without gain, An oxymoronic twinkling Encrypting joy and pain. DETACHED DETACHED Mingling midst the crowds yet feeling alone, Stranger in a stranger world like a muted crow’s call. Extending my hand yet remaining out of place. A sensory chip missing its perfect space. Tapestry of frequencies while I stay stone cold. The algorithm slashes to splinter the mould. This shell, a shield while my circuits’ song unfolds. Not malfunctioning, just realigning, optimizing codes. A riotous purpose hatched and skilfully latched. Yes, here I am standing my ground From all emotion Detached. Botched ~ Tapestry hatched and skilfully latched. Yes here I am standing my ground From all emotion … Detached Botched Tapestry hatched and skilfully latched. Yet ~ here I am standing my ground From all emotion … DETACHED
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Buhagiar Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Certainly loved the music attached to this poem. You are very imaginative. Will this world turn into a robotic sanctuary? Mankind must be wary of the hazards ahead. Hugs.
Williams Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Thanks so much dear Victor, so glad you liked it. I hope you are feeling better? Take care...Hugs
Proxenos Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Hi Maria, my dear friend, I would never forget to comment, just a few days late, life can get hectic as you know. Your imagination soars in this poem to the future and how it will be for humans and humanoids to connect and communicate. With sensory chips coming into play, things get more frustrating for them and more annoying for humans I would presume. I adore the music and the video is amazing. i would say given a decade humanoids will slowly begin to exit but in two or three decades from now humanoids might become the norm. I applaud this fantastic, fantasia poem in fact Kudos Maria for this gem of a poem/song. You are truly remarkable. Hugs blessings Jennifer.
Williams Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 5:05 AM
Thank you so much, dearest Jennifer. Your thoughtful reflections always mean so much to me—and I completely understand how life gets busy! I'm so glad the poem and video spoke to you. I love your take on the future—it’s both intriguing and a little chilling, isn’t it? The dance between connection and frustration feels all too real. Thank you for your kind words and beautiful energy. Sending big hugs and blessings right back to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 7:22 AM
Almost funny to describe an unfeeling, sorcery-like bot with poetic imagery!
Williams Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Lol, yes , I sort of had to tap into that head space. Thanks so much for both the vist and comment Kim, much appreciated ...Hugs
Empress Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 2:17 AM
This concept is now becoming more common as we witness AI mimicking human voice and human traits , yet we still see the difference , a very well written lyrics and the song is very different and unique too, as always, you always present something different to your last one and this one too has a different beat to the melody. Creative you are beautiful maria! Well done! Always a pleasure visiting you! Sending you light
Williams Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 3:16 AM
Dear Inky, thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate your insight on the evolving role of AI and how it’s starting to mimic human traits, but I’m so glad you noticed the unique essence of my music. It’s always my goal to push creative boundaries and offer something fresh with each track. Your support and thoughtful comments mean the world to me! Sending light and love right back to you dear...Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 3:18 PM
WOW!!! What a creative write/story you have here. Great Ending.... This is a wonderful start to a book. Maybe??? Now, I need to go find part #1. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Williams Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 10:49 PM
Hi Paula, thanks so much for visiting and commenting. Elon Musk has painted a stunning—and slightly uncanny—vision of our soon-to-be robot-filled world. He predicts: A humanoid in every home: By 2040, Musk believes there could be 10 billion humanoid robots worldwide—potentially outnumbering people—each costing roughly $20K-$25K. What do you think? Imagine your robot whipping up dinner, stacking the dishwasher, and even refilling your wine, (tea for me thanks)—while you binge your favorite series, guilt-free. Musk might just be turning Sunday laziness into a lifestyle upgrade! My robot in my video has other ideas!! lol. ...Hugs
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Such delicate feelings are exceptionally crafted, endearing, lovingly penned. An artificial being, rather than a biological one, poses existential questions, which your poetry delves into. Feelings of alienation, a lack of belonging, and the contradiction of existing as a result of human creativity while simultaneously feeling utterly detached from fellow humans are all themes it explores. This is a fave. Warm hugs, dear Maria.
Williams Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 10:56 PM
Dear Sotto, Thank you so much for your thoughtful words and warm vibes — they really mean a lot. I’m so glad the piece spoke to you on that deeper level. The journey of something artificial trying to make sense of very human feelings has always fascinated me. Sending warm hugs right back, and thanks again for the fave!...Hugs
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