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   a crow flies upwards

leaving its forlorn shadow

 stranded on the ground


Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/13/2015 1:41:00 PM
Your delightful haiku creates a wonderful image, complimented perfectly by the illustration. Nicely done~Delice
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/13/2015 4:53:00 PM
I am pleased you stopped by to read my humble haiku, Delice. Your lovely comments are appreciated. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 9/12/2015 10:06:00 AM
splendid imagery!
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Kim! Glad that you like:) hugs // paul
Date: 9/11/2015 8:28:00 AM
Good haiku. Separating them, a new journey I believe. Skat
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Skat. A new journey it could well be! // paul
Date: 9/10/2015 2:17:00 PM
This is very inspiring! ...If only humans could fly upwards just as easily... A wonderful haiku, Paul :)
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Date: 9/10/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Kelly. Yes...it would be great to fly up to freedom, leaving life's problems behind:)
Date: 9/10/2015 1:52:00 PM
Powerful imagery, Paul! Great pic as well...
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Date: 9/10/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment...and your support, Dave! All the best. // paul
Date: 9/8/2015 3:33:00 PM
Very interesting...I am really enjoying your haiku...your use of personification for this scene is very intriguing and leaves one to ponder...Always, Laura
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:00:00 PM
I appreciate your lovely feedback, Laura. Thank you for stopping by. ~ Regards ~~ paul
Date: 9/7/2015 12:30:00 PM
wow, what a thought!! I REALLY like this KU!!
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Date: 9/7/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea...and I like your reaction:) // paul
Date: 9/6/2015 1:03:00 AM
Your pen is just golden Paul.. witty! Blessed weekend~Olive Eloisa hugs!
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Date: 9/6/2015 3:57:00 AM
Thank you Olive_eloi:) Yet, that shadow, faithfully, will be waiting patiently for its return! Hugs // paul
Date: 9/5/2015 5:42:00 PM
I like this, Paul! The picture you posted with it goes well and makes the image more vivid! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/5/2015 7:52:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Kim. Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 9/5/2015 2:37:00 PM
I so totally agree with what Anne-Lise has said. quite amazing with so little words. Very gifted pen Paul.... hugs Theresa
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Date: 9/5/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and lovely comments, Theresa! A pleasant weekend to you:) Hugs // paul
Date: 9/5/2015 11:22:00 AM
- Perfect in word and image, well done Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise:) Enjoy the rest of the weekend! Hugs // paul
Date: 9/5/2015 11:20:00 AM
Only you could come up with this gem!
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Date: 9/5/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Judy....you are kind...and you are a gem:) Regards ~ paul
Date: 9/5/2015 10:35:00 AM
An excellent haiku Paul. Have a lovely weekend...Tim
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Date: 9/5/2015 3:39:00 PM
Glad it's to your liking, Tim:) Thank you....and enjoy your weekend, too. // paul
Date: 9/5/2015 9:38:00 AM
Very clever haiku Paul:-) hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2015 5:46:00 PM
had favourited it thanks Paul we will look into it before we visit:-) hugs jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Jan! (By the way.....check out: tallinja.com ... new format; quite helpful.) Hugs // paul
Date: 9/5/2015 9:36:00 AM
Well, you are a smart one, aren't you, dear? :) You write so beautifully, Paul. Lovely...
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Date: 9/5/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Eileen:) You are very generous! Incidentally I regard your work in similar fashion:) Hugs...enjoy the weekend! // paul