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Destiny's Woman

High upon a platform, she dwells among two spheres Her people mumble strange like chants, that rumble in salt air The wizened Seidr woman, beyond her fertile years will hold a staff, against her knees, in regard above her peers She sits upon the platform, while the people sway and dance Her eyes are glassy, semi-closed, her mind is in a trance She is filler of the future's sound, while seeking out the vast She brings to Fjords, the fish they seek, by believing in the past Her voice is as a whisper, she heals and guides them home Her song becomes distant wind, that fades until it's gone Among the barren wasteland, it cackles in the cold Her power is a mountain, found, of spirit frail, yet bold As she sways her words like little birds, that are carried in the breeze there are talking sounds, as if from crowns, released from winter trees _______________________ For the contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton "All Things Norse" 7/26/14

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Date: 8/5/2014 7:44:00 AM
A very enchanting piece to read any time of day.... Showers of applause to you Carrie! ^_^
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:50:00 AM
I enjoyed greatly reading this finely written piece my friend!! Congrats on your win!!!!
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:06:00 AM
Yup another robbed poet ;) NICE Carrie, NICE! not just a retelling but original. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:43:00 AM
Wow, I miss this kind of poetry. Epic, --- many fine lines....congrats...Linda
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:09:00 AM
Lovely write, Carrie. Congrats.
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Date: 8/2/2014 6:13:00 PM
I chose this one because I like sonnets.This one has good flow and rhyme..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there ..Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 4:52:00 PM
love this sonnet Carrie congrats on win and ty for entering hugs
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Date: 7/31/2014 12:21:00 PM
Carrie: this is a very beautiful and well written Sonnet. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla
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Date: 7/27/2014 8:24:00 AM
A very, very beautiful sonnet my friend. A pleasure to read this fine morn. Should do well in the contest, good luck.
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:27:00 AM
Awesome write Carrie ! Loved much !
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