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Destiny's Hidden Magic

somewhere just beyond this shelter and shade is a shimmering pond with magic too strong to fade hidden for centuries so intense is its power to alter destinies in any state and any hour with the smallest drink grand visions you'll behold be careful not to blink before your full story is told or your soul will disappear becoming just a drip joining the pond deep and clear now, do you dare take a sip?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/27/2017 1:36:00 PM
grand visions, nice write Christy
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Date: 1/25/2017 7:04:00 AM
I can say it would indeed be quite tempting to take a sip, but that can be said for many things. Some good for, some not so much...oh what the hell, I'd try it. :) Very thought provoking Christy.
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Date: 1/24/2017 8:15:00 PM
A nice idea for a poem, Christy...Enjoyed! My best regards - Cheers! :) john P.s A seven for originality.
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