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Destiny’s Angel

If I was forbidden fruit Would you still eat me Even if you neon knew I’m not the one from your dreams Stealing away your fuchsia fantasies Feeling you pray for hazel healings If I was on fire would you help Drown my desires with your well Full of holy water spiritually rich Like sleeping beauty would you kiss If I was an engine with no start Would you repair me give me spark Build me a life manufacture a car Making delight of me a new star If I was a soul lost at sea Would you build a boat rescue me Would you brave the ebony elements Just to save my soul from hell again If I was a woman hidden in faith Could you value this as we pray Perhaps I am and have been these things Yet I am for you are angel of my dreams

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Date: 10/27/2024 10:16:00 AM
This is a great poem. Liked the idea of asking "if".
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/27/2024 11:25:00 AM
What a nice comment! Thank you Victor!
Date: 10/26/2024 6:56:00 PM
Love verse 4 the best. Beautiful!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/26/2024 11:49:00 PM
I appreciate you reading this Kim!
Date: 10/26/2024 6:53:00 PM
I love this poem. It sometimes is difficult to know how much we are valued. The rhetorical style leaves the question to be answered by the reader. It's great innovation.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/26/2024 11:48:00 PM
Thanks Hilda!
Date: 10/26/2024 12:19:00 PM
Such a wonderful dream Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/26/2024 1:17:00 PM
Thanks John have a fabulous weekend!

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