Vladislav Raven Poet I do not know?

Destiny Or Choice - Repost

Destiny shines when choice is made,
The two are one within Love's shade.
Does destiny make our choices true?
Taking control, my choice is you, 
Living our choices, not afraid.

For Destiny is not betrayed,
The facts before us they are layed,
Destiny I do follow through,
Destiny Shines.

Destiny has called, I have stayed,
Many wrong choices I have made,
Yet destiny has seen me through,
Destiny I believe in you.
Destiny, choice, at mind's door layed,
Destiny shines.

04/01/2019

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Vladislav Raven January 17, 2019 at 6:26 PM I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 1:34 PM - A great win my friend, congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 5:33 PM Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by with your congratulations on my win in the contest. it is much appreciated. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Gershon Wolf January 6, 2019 at 1:15 PM It seems that this wonderful poem was 'destined' to be a winner in the contest. Congrats, Mike! Best wishes, Gershon Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 4:01 PM Hi Gershon, thank you for dropping by with your congrats on my placement in the contest. I have to thank you my friend. I would never have thought of putting it into the contest if you hadn't said, so thank you my friend. have a wonderful end to your Sunday. your friend always....Mike.

Alexis Y. January 6, 2019 at 12:07 PM WoW! Mike, It was my pleasure to read this well written piece. The title alone compelled me. As I began I was not disappointed. You have a way words and you know how to use them. Great job my friend:-)Alexis Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 3:52 PM Hi Alexis, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece Alexis, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Destiny or choice? We all have our different opinions on destiny. In life it can be a hard question to answer. I believe in destiny. Have a wonderful end to your Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Silent One January 6, 2019 at 10:41 AM I didnt realise this one was for the contest... destiny or fate, now that is food for thought.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 3:38 PM Hi Silent, I do see now that people are putting on the names of contests and the sponsor's names. Not quite used to doing that. Anyway, I am glad of my placement in your contest. I am glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful end to your Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2019 at 3:33 PM Hi Mike, sorry I am not around much. I do appreciate your visits. Beautiful piece thanks for reposting it. Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 3:06 PM Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this work, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Always happy to see you my friend. enjoy my visits to your work. Destiny or choice? That is always the question. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Funom Makama January 5, 2019 at 10:11 AM Great write... A powerful piece full of intriguing lines.. I believe in destiny which should have a needed favour for my efforts to reach a good end. Wonderful write friend Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 2:36 PM Hi Funom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I believe in destiny. I just wonder if it is destiny all the way, or if I make a choice and then destiny takes over. Whatever, I know I end up where destiny wishes me to be. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Arturo Michael January 5, 2019 at 9:18 AM Apart from some DNA issues...destiny is an open door...not sure if we're under its control...or we can will where our destiny flows....Happy 2019 Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 2:28 PM Hi Arturo, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Destiny or choice? Many of us have different answers to this question. I like to think I make my choice and then destiny does play her part. Have a wonderful end to your Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Silent One January 5, 2019 at 6:43 AM Oh destiny or fate, that is the question.. loved your peom my friend, we should always believe in destiny and never lose hope, sometimes we can write our own, but sometimes it juts hits us... Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 2:13 PM Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece. it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. Indeed, it is always the question. Destiny or choice, what does move us? I reckon I shall hold to destiny. Have a wonderful Sunday evening. your friend always....Mike.

Eve Roper January 4, 2019 at 3:54 PM Enjoyed reading, Mike. May destiny always shine not only in your life of love , but also in your writings. Hugs Eve ~`* Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 12:31 PM Hi Eve, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Destiny or choice, such a big question. We can all believe in destiny in so many different ways.I always believe that I make the choice and then destiny leads me where it will. New question, does destiny lead me to my choice? Have a wonderful Sunday Eve. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 3:32 PM - I hope destiny will always shine on your way, my dear friend Mike - Thanks for this beautiful poem :) - I wish you a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vladislav Raven January 5, 2019 at 11:29 AM Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Will we ever truly know whether our lives follow the way of destiny or choice. I believe that I make the choice and then destiny does take over. My destiny keeps me on the road I am on. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Gershon Wolf January 4, 2019 at 2:23 PM I think that this is truly profound, Mike. It can be read and pondered again and again... Why not enter it in Silent One's "Food for Thought" poetry contest? Seems to me that this would do quite well...All the best, Gershon Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 3:28 PM Hi Gershon, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. I decided to enter the piece. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. I seem to be lucky, all my choices seem to read to the same destiny. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong January 4, 2019 at 10:55 AM A very beautiful way to view destiny Mike. I believe in destiny! Have a blessed new year my friend! : ) xxoo Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 2:35 PM Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. All my choices seem to lead me to the same destiny and it is not a destiny I would try and turn from. My heart shall always follow where destiny leads. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Charlie Smith January 4, 2019 at 10:31 AM It's never betrayed when your choice is made, well done Mike, my very best to your New Year... Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 2:14 PM Hi Charlie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am happy you liked the piece. First make the choice and then let destiny have her way. My heart follows where destiny leads. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit January 4, 2019 at 9:47 AM You can never go wrong choosing true love..destiny follows. I like the upbeat voices in your last stanza..looking forward, your destiny shines regardless of the past. Great messages in your poem, Mike. Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 1:34 PM Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. No matter what choices I make I always seem to be on the same destined path, so I shall stay on this path. Love is an eternal song. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.