Destiny (Double Tanka)
My humanity
Sees reflection in water
As the ice now thaws
Watch it run like a river
As death casts shadow on me
New life in the spring?
No, this cannot be for me
As I’ve chosen route
Where once was life, now bares death
Now, where’s death, you will find me
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