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Destiny Democracy?

Neon lights shape gargoyle faces Are the streets (alive) or are they restless? Unease and motive make their play, Hidden minds promote! Outlines are strange, While blame is cultured, a virtue less pearl The espoused truth of a dumbed down world. A (consumer vision) still splutters to live; It owes so much from a refusal to give, So when daylight comes will it see a way Past losses of freedom – trust – equality? Or will it be dwarfed with the shadows of doubt, And dammed in the spotlight with no way out? © Joe Maverick 26-09-2010

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Date: 10/7/2012 12:48:00 PM
Is there such a thing as a democracy with no vote? Perhaps prisons are democracies where our wills are our votes - J.A.B. %
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Date: 1/15/2012 9:43:00 AM
The media has an adverse effect on those who wish to think. We no longer have a say. Deep write.
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Joe
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Date: 11/20/2011 8:18:00 PM
Congrats Joe on featured poem on PS.. this week.. wonderful one to share luv...
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:12:00 AM
The last two lines tell the story. Intriguing work! Thank you for your kind words. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:33:00 AM
very creative view, well stated. thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:06:00 AM
Very nice and creative write on Destiny Democracy, Joe
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