Destiny

It's late in the evening
And I've been watching stars in the sky
When I see you in my thoughts
And smile with you in my heart..

Then when the cool breeze of wind
Blows the dark clouds up
You're gone with my thoughts
And you're now crying with my smile..

But deep inside of me is you
You give life to what I do
All those years may see you through
Still I've been waiting here for you

Even if you cannot love me
Just stay with me and call me friend is all I want to be
And I know it is hard to let you go or set you free
But what can I do, if I'm not your destiny?

02-17-2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 3/4/2017 4:32:00 AM
Wonderful rhymes! I know that God will set His perfect time. Just wait and pray for it! And you'll be surprised for His reply.
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Date: 2/24/2017 5:03:00 PM
Nice, Jeniffer. Yes, it sure is a hard thing - so hard that it gives me a bad feeling just thinking about it. Still, sometimes it's the right thing, the only thing that is best for the long run, for our lives to go on and be better.
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Date: 2/17/2017 12:50:00 PM
Still I've been waiting here for you' When someone in love, he never think what he get return, Just waiting for a good time. Lovely lines. :)
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Jeniffer Garcia
Date: 2/17/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Ali for appreciating my poem.
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