Destiny

The patterned rain falls from the deep blue sky
Staining the ground with its unmistaken film
The deafening sound of the icy shrill
Is enough to make the heart weep
But I stand within the shroud
Loathing the enemy and envisioning the fire
It remains within my reach
The eternal flame of a lonely imagination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 5:30 PM
FINE FREE VERSE. Congrats on your win..
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:18 AM
AVERY, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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