Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

Destiny

Life’s journeys all on a map
At cross roads we meet
Destiny is defeated
I continue to drink from the vines of my past
As you drown in the illusions of your tomorrows
Fate drinks the blood of destinies defeat
The kiss of death
Shall join us in our loneliness
Passions defeated army
Shall march on
Towards another red valentines

Notes: There I drained out all my poetic happiness, I am back to normal now!

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Phyllis Babcock June 11, 2014 at 12:57 PM A very creative gem of a poem. Love it. love phyl

Kelly Deschler June 10, 2014 at 9:36 PM This is so expressive, Arthur! I can feel the emotion coming through in each and every line. Very powerful words! A great write!

Doris Jamoner June 8, 2014 at 10:35 PM Such a wonderful poem.. IT really touched my heart. This poem says many things in just a few lines. - All the Best Doris

Lucilla Carrillo June 8, 2014 at 12:13 PM I'm glad - for a minute there, I was worried. Arthur; does our destiny meet up with fate and death. How does that work? Maybe - you should write a poem about -- hope, love, destiny, death and fate. I just know that you can come up with something great. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 12:08 PM Another great write - love the imagery. Thank you for sharing this gem!

Tim Smith June 8, 2014 at 6:14 AM Whew...thought you were losing it...march on Arthur Vaso June 12, 2014 at 9:31 PM Thanks Tim, I will be back to my Poe dark side soon now!!

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 5:47 AM Very strong write; have to echo Olive's comment about those two stricking lines! [There's a lovely old song by Paul Anka: "You are my destiny"....] // paul Arthur Vaso June 12, 2014 at 9:30 PM Thanks Paul, I love oldies music! Paul Anka is Canadian too!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 8, 2014 at 1:51 AM HAHAHAH, laugh at the footnote.. :P .. :D these lines drink from the vines of my past then drown in illusions of your tomorrows... wow!!!!!!!! they are heart pulling.. Arthur Vaso June 12, 2014 at 9:28 PM Thank you so much Olive!!! for such beautiful comments!