Destiny

shards of azure sky
weave me into future dreams...
captain of my ship

dreamfutureselfhaiku

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Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:48 AM

Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 1, 2014 at 2:14 AM

Great images to convey what is destiny, Ded, congrats on the win

Barbara Gorelick

June 30, 2014 at 7:15 PM

Very, very pretty Deb. Congrats .BG

Pandita Sietesantos

June 30, 2014 at 4:43 PM

Hi Deb, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita

Arlene Smith

June 30, 2014 at 4:37 PM

I truly love this one, Deb! My favorite so far! Hugs and congrats on a top win.. Arlene

Paul Callus

June 30, 2014 at 3:12 PM

A top rating for this haiku, Deb. When all is said and done, we are the ones who have to take the decisions that influence our life. Congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Len Gasun

June 30, 2014 at 11:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend, Deb for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora