Destiny

An enlightened soul
guides us spiritually;
if we are willing




written on 4.6.2014
by Mohan Chutani
Haiku: syllable count 5/7/5
Earlier in the Contest on the theme and titled 'Destiny' by Leonora Galinta
Now in the Contest on the theme of 'Haiku on enlightenment' by Marvin Celestial
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Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 9:35 AM
that last line is so perfect for your poem. Congrats on your win. enjoyed seeing this one for the first time.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 7:27 AM
total surrender friend to our God almighty.. :) kudos my friend :)
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:00 AM
Inspiring spiritual thought, a great message, Mohan. congrats on the win,
Chutani Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:30 AM
Dr. Ram, thanks for your encouragement. Mohan
Smith Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Congrats on a great win, Mohan.. The willing part- so true.. Hugs.. Arlene
Chutani Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Thanks Arlene for your nice comments. I believe, willingness of a person is destined. Mohan
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June 30, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Hi Mohan, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your great win. Wonderful Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita
Chutani Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Pandita, your warm complements do cheer me up. thanks. Mohan
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Good reasoning, Mohan! In the end it all depends on us! Congratulations on a merited win! // paul
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June 30, 2014 at 7:34 PM
yes Paul, definitely, implicit in this is that are we destined to have the capacity to receive? Thanks for your cherished support. Mohan
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June 30, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations my dear friend for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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June 30, 2014 at 12:18 PM
Leonora, thank you for your placement in your contest. It was fun to participate. and you chose a wonderful theme-destiny. My first collection of published poems, in Hindi, is titled-Matra Nimit- meaning 'destined only'. Mohan
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June 9, 2014 at 4:02 PM
You Are welcome once again... thanks for the reply
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June 9, 2014 at 8:33 AM
a fine haiku Mohan, wishing you the best of luck....Linda
Chutani Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Big thank you, Linda. Mohan
Sharma Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:57 AM
In god if one trusts then there is nothing to fear:)
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June 8, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Vandana, your comment itself can be converted to a lovely Haiku. Thanks for visit. Keep visiting. Mohan
Canama Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 2:22 AM
A very pensive haiku! Best wishes and God bless!
Chutani Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Estela for your visit, wishes and blessings. Mohan
Christian Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:45 PM
lovely
Chutani Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 8:33 PM
Thanx diane. wish me luck also. Mohan
Tanner Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:34 PM
Good one, and nice angle. Good luck in the contest.
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June 4, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Thanx James for visit and wishes. Mohan
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