Destiny

An enlightened soul guides us spiritually; if we are willing written on 4.6.2014 by Mohan Chutani Haiku: syllable count 5/7/5 Earlier in the Contest on the theme and titled 'Destiny' by Leonora Galinta Now in the Contest on the theme of 'Haiku on enlightenment' by Marvin Celestial

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2014 9:35:00 AM

that last line is so perfect for your poem. Congrats on your win. enjoyed seeing this one for the first time.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2014 7:27:00 AM

total surrender friend to our God almighty.. :) kudos my friend :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 5:00:00 AM

Inspiring spiritual thought, a great message, Mohan. congrats on the win,

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 6:30:00 AM

Dr. Ram, thanks for your encouragement. Mohan

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 9:19:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Mohan.. The willing part- so true.. Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 10:00:00 PM

Thanks Arlene for your nice comments. I believe, willingness of a person is destined. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:53:00 PM

Hi Mohan, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your great win. Wonderful Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:32:00 PM

Pandita, your warm complements do cheer me up. thanks. Mohan

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2014 3:28:00 PM

Good reasoning, Mohan! In the end it all depends on us! Congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:34:00 PM

yes Paul, definitely, implicit in this is that are we destined to have the capacity to receive? Thanks for your cherished support. Mohan

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 12:18:00 PM

Leonora, thank you for your placement in your contest. It was fun to participate. and you chose a wonderful theme-destiny. My first collection of published poems, in Hindi, is titled-Matra Nimit- meaning 'destined only'. Mohan